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Sep 3Liked by JJ Pryor

I didn't realize I was missing your words until they showed up after such an absence. Nice to have you back. I love to read but doubt I could ever write something worthwhile. Although I have contemplated taking my childhood and teenage diaries and taking a stab at writing about life in a small town in the 60's and 70's. Not sure I can drill read my own writing, though. STAY COOL!

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Even if you never get it into something you want to share, I bet it'd be an awesome nostalgic trip down memory lane!

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Sep 3·edited Sep 3Liked by JJ Pryor

Great article here. I've been chopping out my "darlings" since I took Stephen King's advice. It is always an improvement! I liked the audio book.

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It's such a difficult thing to do haha. I'm pretty sure my own version of his rule is Final version = Draft + 10%

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Sep 4Liked by JJ Pryor

Okay. I have a trick that helps spot my darlings! It is a matter of viewing the piece as if you are an outside reader and testing it for a smooth flow. I chop away and it probably comes to about 10%!

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